Spec Flashpoint — Part One (B)

by Alex on November 1, 2008

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Part 2 of 7

    Time to continue on our little homework assignment and break down 2 other Flashpoint episodes.

    Part One: Breaking it
    B — Episodes 1×08 & 1×09

    The following are breakdowns of Flashpoint 1×08 and 1×09, via the broadcast episode.

    Episode 1×08

    The plot revolves around a framed fellon loose in a tribunal, seeking revenge on his prosecutor, all while Ed is being interviewed for his own trial for wrongful death (cf Pilot).

    What we will call the ” Hostage situation ” is everything revolving around Ed taken hostage by the fellon, and the ” “Suicide” situation ” the point where the fellon turns the gun on himself.


    Storylines:

    A: Tribunal situation
    Ay: Framed Fellon before and after tribunal
    Ax: Fellon loose in tribunal (before Ed being a hostage)
    Ac: Hostage situation with Ed
    Az: “Suicide” situation
    Ab: Hostage and “Suicide” situation via SRU POV (and learning Fellon’s background)

    B: Post-hostage situation from SRU POV

    C: Ed
    Cb: Being sued (SRU and Tribunal)
    Cx: At tribunal before and after hostage situation

    The C plotline seems small overall but this is the main story-arc of the season (the repercussions of Ed’s actions in the pilot).

    Keep in mind that this breakdown was made with the broadcast episode, not the actual script, and that most of these scenes are only a few seconds long and intercut.
    One minute equals roughly one page.

    Breakdown:

    Teaser/Act One — 16 Scenes (exposition of A and C stories) — 8 Minutes
    1 — Ab
    2 — Ac
    3 — Ab
    4 — Ac
    5 — Ab
    6 — Ac
    -> FLASHBACK
    7 — Ay
    8 — Cb
    9 — Ay
    10 — Cb
    11 — Ay
    12 — Cb
    13+14+15 — Ay
    16 — Ay leading to Ax
    END OF ACT ONE just as Fellon is loose in tribunal -> Ax

    Act Two — 18 Scenes (Lead-in to Hostage situation) — 5 Minutes 45 Seconds
    17 — Cb leading to Cx
    18 — Cx
    19 — Ab
    20 — Cx
    21 — Ax
    22 — Cx
    23 — Ax
    24 — Cx
    25 — Ax
    26 — Cx
    27 — Ax leading to Ac
    28 — Cx leading to Ac
    29+30 Ac
    31 — Ab
    32 — Ac
    33 — Ab
    34 — Ac
    35 — Ab
    END OF ACT TWO

    Act Three — 15 Scenes (Hostage situation) — 7 Minutes 25 Seconds
    36+37 Ab
    38 — Ac
    39 — Ab
    40 — Ac
    41 — Ab
    42 — Ac
    43 — Ab
    44 — Ac
    45 — Ab
    46 — Ac
    47 — Ab
    48 — Ac
    49 — Ab
    50 — Ac
    END OF ACT THREE

    Act Four — 24 Scenes (Conclusion of Hostage situation) — 11 Minutes 20 Seconds
    51+52+53 — Ab
    54 — Ac
    55 — Ab
    56 — Ac
    57+58+59 — Ab
    60 — Ac
    61 — Ab
    62 — Ac
    63+64+65+66 — Ab
    67 — Ac
    68 — Ab
    69 — Ac
    70 — Ab
    71 — Ac
    72 — Cx+Ab
    73 — Ac leading to Az
    END OF ACT FOUR just as Fellon turns gun on himself -> Az

    Act Five — 12 Scenes (“Suicide” situation and Conclusion) — 7 Minutes 40 Seconds
    74 — Cx+Ab
    75 — Az
    76 — Ab
    77 — Az
    78 — Cx
    79 — Cx+Ab
    80 — Cx+Az
    81 — Cx+Ay
    82 — Cx+Ab
    83 — Ab
    84 — Cx
    85 — Ay

    Summary:

    Episode 1×08 — 85 beats

    A storyline total: 13 + 11 + 15 + 23 + 10 = 72 beats
    Ay storyline: 7 + 0 + 0 + 0 + 2 = 9 beats
    Ax storyline: 0 + 4 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 4 beats
    Ac storyline: 3 + 3 + 7 + 8 + 0 = 21 beats
    Az storyline: 0 + 0 + 0 + 0 + 3 = 3 beats
    Ab storyline: 3 + 4 + 8 + 15 + 5 = 35 beats

    B storyline: 0 + 0 + 0 + 0 + 3 = 3 beats

    C storyline total: 6 + 7 + 0 + 1 + 7 = 28 beats
    Cb storyline: 3 + 1 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 4 beats
    Cx storyline: 0 + 6 + 0 + 1 + 7 = 14 beats

    Episode 1×09

    The plot revolves around a house where is present a newly abducted girl (Lilly), her kidnaper (Gerald), and another girl (Penny) abducted by the man 8 years prior and having a strong case of Stockholm Syndrome.
    The SRU makes an assault on the house, with Jules trying to calm Penny down and Greg dealing with his own personal past.


    Storylines:

    A: Assault on House
    Ab: Assault — SRU outside house
    Ay: Assault — Upstairs (Jules, Sam, Penny and Lilly)
    Av: Assault — Basement and tunnel — pursuing Gerald
    Az: Post-Assault

    B: Pre-Assault
    Bx Pre-assault — Gerald + Lilly
    Bz Pre-Assault — Penny
    Bv Pre-Assault — SRU

    C: Greg
    D: Jules

    Keep in mind that this breakdown was made with the broadcast episode, not the actual script, and that most of these scenes are only a few seconds long and intercut.
    One minute equals roughly one page.

    Breakdown:

    Teaser/Act One — 19 Scenes (exposition of B, C and D stories) — 8 Minutes and 25 Seconds
    1 — Bv
    2 — Bx
    3 — Bz
    4 — Bx
    5 — Bz
    6 — Bv
    7 — Bx
    FLASHBACK
    8 — Bz (dream)
    9 — Bz
    10 — C
    11 — Bz
    12+13 — Bx
    14 — C+D
    15 — Bx
    16 — Bv
    17 — Bz
    18 — Bx
    19 — Bz+Bx
    END OF ACT ONE

    Act Two — 21 Scenes (Pre-Assault) — 7 Minutes
    20 — Bv
    21 — Bv+C
    22 — Bz+Bx
    23 — Bv
    24 — Bz+Bx
    25 — Bv
    26 — Bz+Bx
    27 — Bz
    28 — Bx
    29 — Bv
    30 — Bx
    40 — Bv+Bx+Bz leading to A
    END OF ACT TWO as we move to the Assault

    Act Three — 24 Scenes (Assault) — 6 Minutes
    41 — Ab
    42+43 — Ay
    44+45 — Ab
    46+47 — Ay
    48 — Ab
    49 — Ay
    50+51+52 — Ab
    53 — Ay
    54 — Ab leading to Av
    55 — Ay
    56 — Ab
    57 — Ay
    58 — Av
    59+60 — Ay
    61 — Ab
    62 — Av
    63 — Ab
    END OF ACT THREE

    Act Four — 17 Scenes (Continuatio
    n of Assault)
    — 10 Minutes
    64 — Ab
    65 — Ay
    66 — Ab+Ay (with C+D moments)
    67 — Ab
    68 — Av
    69 — Ay
    70 — Ab
    71 — Ay
    72 — Av
    73 — Ab
    74 — Av
    75 — Ab
    76+77 — Ay
    78 — Ay
    79 — Av
    80 — Ay
    END OF ACT FOUR

    Act Five — 18 Scenes (Conclusion of Assault) — 10 Minutes
    81+82 — Ab+Ay
    83+84 — Ay
    85 — Ab
    86 — Ay
    87+88 — Av
    89 — Ay
    90 — Ab
    91 — Ay
    92 — Ab+Ay
    93 — Ay leading to Az
    94 — Az
    95 — C+D
    96 — C
    97 — Az
    END OF ACT FIVE

    Summary:

    Episode 1×09 — 92 beats

    A storyline total: 0 + 0 + 22 + 18 + 17 = 57 beats
    Ab storyline: 0 + 0 + 11 + 6 + 4 = 21 beats
    Ay storyline: 0 + 0 + 9 + 8 + 9 = 26 beats
    Avstoryline: 0 + 0 + 2 + 4 + 2 = 8 beats
    Az storyline: 0 + 0 + 0 + 0 + 2 = 2 beats

    B storyline total: 16 + 17 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 33 beats
    Bx storyline: 7 + 6 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 13 beats
    Bz storyline: 6 + 5 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 11 beats
    Bv storyline: 3 + 6 + 0 + 0 + 0 = 9 beats

    C storyline: 2 + 1 + 0 + 1 + 2 = 6 beats
    D storyline: 1 + 0 + 0 + 1 + 1 = 3 beats

    Coming up next time: thoughts on the structure of a Flaspoint episode.

    Series NavigationSpec Flashpoint — Part One (A)Spec Flashpoint — Part One (C)


    Possible Related posts:

    1. Spec Flashpoint — Part One (A)
    2. Spec Flashpoint — Part One (C)
    3. Spec Flashpoint — Final Thoughts
    4. Spec Flashpoint — Part Two (B)
    5. Spec Flashpoint — Part Two (A)

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