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Posts published in October 2008

Scary business

Remember that news about NBC cutting costs?

Well CBS may also do that in the very near future as they announced yesterday a third quarter loss of $12.5 billion (linked to a $14 billion write-down) with ad revenue declining in its main divisions, including television.

Incidentally, digital revenues have rose 6% this year with a 12% increase regarding Internet display ads.

As for their revenues, they are up 3%, thanks primarily to CSI: NY’s cable syndication.

All in all, CBS is now in the top 10 Internet company and the “#1 producer and provider of premium online content”.

No wonder they are trying to cash in on the future.

Meanwhile, Yahoo Video is now the (distant) second in video streams with a 56% increase (to about 265 millions).
Still, Google’s YouTube is very far ahead with 5 billion video streams in September.
Let’s not forget though that most Yahoo Vids have ads in them (= money = good for the company).

Speaking of, Lisa Klink has posted about “[trying to come] at the TV biz sideways”. Meaning that wannabe TV (and for that matter any) writer wanting to break in will have better chance of doing that by trying various other “creative outlets”.
TV writing is becoming increasingly more competitive due to a number of reasons, including strong cuts in budgets, therefore creating a smaller gap for people to squeeze in.
Any kind of “out of the box” success will definitely be a plus, distinguishing you from the rest.

Spec Flashpoint – Part One (A)

Everyone needs some kind of procedural spec under his/her belt, and a great action/cop one can be the way to go.
A few reasons pushed me to spec Flashpoint, and I thought wise, for those out there who wish to spec the show, to post my various breakdowns of FP episodes as well as my overall research on the show, à la Chuck, on my blog.
So here goes.

Part One: Breaking it

A – Pilot Episode

The following is a breakdown of the Flashpoint pilot, through its shooting script.

The plot revolves around presenting us the SRU team, especially Ed, as well as the arrival of a new member, connecting everything with an enraged gunman at a Plaza.

What we will call the “Plaza sequence” is everything revolving around what happens at the Plaza with the gunman.

Storylines:

A: Gunman Plotline and Plaza sequence (comprises of Ax + Ab + Ac)
Ax : Backstory of Gunman, events leading up to SRU arrival, and what happens after to Gunman/Family
Ab: Plaza sequence with SRU on scene
Ac: Plaza sequence from Ed’s POV

B: SRU life, routine – Before and After the Plaza sequence (not including Ab)
C: Ed’s life – Before (family) and After (interrogation) the Plaza sequence (not including Ac)
D: Arrival of a new SRU member

It should be noted that a few “B story” scenes revolved around Jules (hinting at a future romance between Sam and her), but for the sake of argument, I merged her SRU scenes with the larger B storyline. Ditto for her scenes on the rooftop (merged with Ab).

Breakdown:

Episode 1×01 – 66 pages

Teaser – 5 Scenes (exposition of A story) – 3 pages
1+2 – Ab
3 – Ac
4 – Ab
5 – Ac

Act One – 17 Scenes (Before Plaza sequence) – 20 pages
5 – Ac (repeat of last Teas scene)
-> FLASHBACK
6+7+8 – C
9+10+11 – Ax
12 – D
13 – B
14 – Ax
15 – D
16 – B
17 – Ax
18+19 – B leading to Ab
20 – D
21+22 – B leading to Ab
END OF ACT ONE just as the SRU arrives on the scene -> Ab

Act Two – 29 Scenes (During Plaza sequence) – 17 pages
23+24 – Ab
25 – Ac
26 – Ab
27+28 – Ac
29 – D
30+31 – Ab
32 – Ac
33 – Ab+D
34 – Ac
35+36+37 – Ab
38 – Ac
39 – Ab
40 – Ac
41 – Ab
42 – Ac
43 – Ab
44 – Ac
45 – Ab
46 – Ac
47 – Ab
48 – Ab+D
49+50 – Ab
51 – Ac leading back to C
END OF ACT TWO just as Ed is taken away by inspector -> C

Act Three – 12 Scenes (After Plaza sequence) – 17 pages
52+53 – C
54 – Ab leading back to B
55 – D
56+57 – C
58+59 – B+D
60+61 – C
62 – B+D
END OF ACT THREE

Act Four – 7 Scenes (Continuing – After Plaza sequence) – 9 pages
63 – C
64 – B+C+D
65 – C+D
66 – Ax
67 – B
68 – D
69 – C

Summary:

Episode 1×01 – 69 beats

A storyline total: 5 + 5 + 28 + 2 = 40 beats
Ax storyline: 0 + 5 + 0 + 1 = 6 beats
Ab storyline: 3 + 0 + 17 + 1 = 21 beats
Ac storyline: 2 + 0 + 11 + 0 = 13 beats

B storyline: 0 + 6 + 0 + 4 = 10 beats

C storyline: 0 + 3 + 0 + 10 = 13 beats

D storyline: 0 + 3 + 3 + 6 = 12 beats

Tune in next time as
we will discuss in more depth the overall Flashpoint structure, through other FP breakdowns (Episodes 8 & 9).